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You fall -
but do not worry about hitting the ground
The space is clean
but the air sucks dirty.
Splashing down -
the chair absorbs your pain
but it is not enough,
too saturated with tears.
The river runs a different shade,
salty - like the capsules.
The engine runs,
The song plays -
but the notes hear different.
The night stars glisten in your doused eyes,
Peace settles and aquaints itself.
Forever is upon, forever is the end.
but do not worry about hitting the ground
The space is clean
but the air sucks dirty.
Splashing down -
the chair absorbs your pain
but it is not enough,
too saturated with tears.
The river runs a different shade,
salty - like the capsules.
The engine runs,
The song plays -
but the notes hear different.
The night stars glisten in your doused eyes,
Peace settles and aquaints itself.
Forever is upon, forever is the end.
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A few years ago a family member of mine took his own life in his car. We were not particulaly close but obviously the news was a shock. This was the inspiration for this poem.
This poem is not a tribute to him as like I said I was not close enough to him to be able to write about him. This is mearly my attempt at tryig to understand.
This poem is not a tribute to him as like I said I was not close enough to him to be able to write about him. This is mearly my attempt at tryig to understand.
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